Thought I'd share some fiction that I wrote a few months ago. Any comments are welcome.

------------------------------- I walk up behind you, my hands caressing your hair away from your neck so I can kiss it. I can feel the small shudders that run through you as my fingers gently touch your skin, and then again as my breath, and once again as my lips gently dance across your skin. My hands move to your shoulders, my fingers slowly dancing up and down your arms while I continue to gently kiss your neck and move up towards your ear. "You look absolutely delectable and smell utterly intoxicating, " I whisper in your ear before gently nibbling on your lobe.

You lean back into me and I wrap me arms around you, holding you close.

I start to caress your sides, running my fingers down to your waist and back up through the fabric of your dress. I gently trace the top of your panties around towards your stomach, giving me an excuse for my arms to rub against your breasts. I press you forward a bit to ensure that you have your balance and back my body away a bit while continuing to kiss your neck, slowly moving towards the zipper. I slowly start to unzip, kissing the newly exposed skin along the way until I reach the bottom. With my head kissing and toying the small of your back, I ease the straps off your shoulders and let the dress fall to your feet. I take a step back to take in your magnificent visage.

Did I forget to mention that we were standing in front of a large mirror? I step back towards you, my hands dancing across your stomach with heightened fervor.

My mouth attacks the other side of your neck.

My fingers trace the outlines of your panties and bra. You press back into me, my excitement apparent, pressed against your right hip. My fingers then dance across the fabric restraining your glorious breasts.

gently playing with your nipples through the fabric. I then take one hand and trace a lazy path down your stomach while I work the other towards the clasp.

When my fingers reach the waistband, they continue to search through the fabric until I find the spot I'm looking for.

I unclasp your bra just as my fingers start to dance across your personal place. You let out a low moan and involuntarily spread your legs a bit, allowing me a bit easier access. You abruptly turn around, press your self into me and we kiss passionately, me arms holding you tight against me while I run one hand through your hair.

Our tongues meet and dance around, exploring each other.

After what seem like an eternity, we break and you step back looking me up and down and say, "You're looking a bit overdressed right now. Let's take care of that." And with that, you step in and grab for my belt.

Once you have that undone, you rub your hands along the front of my pants, caressing my confined length, tracing the outline through my pants. As you are doing so, I reach forward and cup your breasts in my hands, running my fingernails over your nipples. I step back in close, trapping your arms between us.

I move my hands up to cup your face and kiss you once again. I can feel one hand gripping my length while the other fumbles to unbutton my pants. With them loosened, I take a step back to let them drop to the ground, but bend over to start kissing my way down your neck. I also gently push you backwards until your back is up against the mirror. As my lips reach your breasts, my tongue starts to play along your skin while one hand cups a breast. With the other, I reach down and remove my pants from around my ankles. Once they are off, I start to trace little meandering patterns along your stomach with my free hand, the patterns random, but slowly getting larger and closer to your panties. I move back to kiss your lips and switch hands. As I start to toy your other breast, my free hand moves straight down your stomach, my fingernails gently scratching along your skin. Just as my fingers reach your crotch, I take your nipple into my mouth and run my tongue around it. My fingers find your personal place and i simultaneously rub it through your ever wettening panties. You reach down and grab my head, bringing it up to yours.

I wrap my arms around you and press in close, our tongues meet and we kiss passionately. My hands caress your back as our tongues entwine. I reach down and place both hands under your soft place. Sensing my motives, you hop up a bit and I lift you off the ground.

You wrap your legs around my waist and arms around my neck, our kiss never ceasing.

I move us away from the mirror and over towards the bed.

As I sit you down on the bed, we break our kiss. While you adjust yourself on the edge of the bed I remove my shirt leaving both of us only in our underwear.

"Now we're even, " I say playfully. With a mischievous glint in your eye you lean forward, grab my waistband with one hand, pull it down, and grab my now free length with the other. "Not anymore, " you say before leaning in to kiss the head of my hard, throbbing length.

As your lips gently touch the head, I can't help but let out a small moan.

You look up at me and I take your face in my hands.

I drop to my knees to that we are more or less eye level and once again kiss you passionately. Once our tongues start to get reacquainted, I run my hands down your sides until I reach you panties. I start to pull them down. You lift yourself up enough to allow me to remove them. I can immediately smell the intoxicating aroma of your arousal.

I lean in, pushing you backwards onto the bed. Our kiss breaks when you fall beyond where I can reach so I start kissing and caressing your stomach. My fingers meander around while my tongue starts a direct path towards your crotch. I can feel you starting to part your legs a bit. As my tongue gets closer, I start bringing my hands down towards your thighs. I stop and pick up one of your legs.

I start kissing around your knee and start working my way back towards your hip, being sure to pay attention to all of the sensitive areas I find along the way. I can feel you tense a little as I approach the top of your leg anticipating...

Rather than the obvious destination, I move to your other leg and repeat on that one.

Once my tongue approaches your crotch once again, I trace the outer edges of your lips, savoring both your moans and feeling you tense beneath me.

Not being too cruel, my tongue finds your personal place and I can feel you both tense and relax simultaneously. I bring a hand up to hold your lips apart so I can reach more of your personal place. My tongue dances across it and even down to taste you.

I even dare to find just how far inside you my tongue will reach.

When I move back to sucking on your personal place, I replace my tongue with a finger.

You grab my head with both hands and entwine your finger in my hair. The pulling on my hair and pressure holding my head in place tells me that you are getting ready to cum. I don't let up, my tongue working constantly as I feel your body contracting underneath me. I only stop when you push my head away.

I stand up to stretch my legs a little and you slowly sit up. You reach out for my length and gently run your fingers up and down it's length. You stand up and gently pulling on me, turn me around.

When my back is to the bed you abruptly push me backwards so I fall onto my back. No sooner have I stopped bouncing on the bed then you have straddled me and we start kissing. You can feel me length pressed against your stomach. You start working your way down my chest, teasing me the way I did you. When you reach my crotch, you bring your mouth close to the head of my length, but just blow on it. The blast of air sends a chill running through me and I can tell you felt it and liked it by the grin that overcomes you. You slowly extend your tongue and ever so gently touch the tip. You slowly trace the edges with the tip of your tongue, one hand holding my shaft while you use the fingernails of the other to lightly scratch and caress my balls.

Once your tongue has moved all the way down, you start toying back up to the top. You are driving my crazy with the light touch. When you reach the tip again, you kiss it. Letting your lips linger, you then part your lips and start to take me into your mouth, your tongue starting to play with my head. You release the head and proceed to toy all the way down my shaft while caressing my balls. You then toy and gently suck them as well.

After a few intense minutes, I take a hold of your head and guide your face back up to mine.

While we are sharing a passionate kiss, I gently roll you onto your back. Grasping me, you guide me into you as I roll on top. I can feel you gasp through the kiss as my head presses past your lips.

I start pushing farther in, then pulling back until I am fully inside you. I can feel your muscles contract around me as I push deep inside.

We break our kiss and I find a rhythm that you seem to enjoy and continue... You are running your fingers along my back. The longer we make love, the more pressure you apply, scratching my back. After some time you wrap your arms firmly around me and I can feel you lift a shoulder towards me. Following your lead a back off slightly only to have you quickly roll me over in a position switch. We break our embrace and in the adjustments I slip out of you. You grab my wrists and hold them above my head. Leaning close we kiss passionately again, our tongues longing for each other. You sit up on your knees and straddle my hips. You grasp me at the base of my shaft and start to lower yourself onto me.

We both gasp a little as the head passes your lips. As you continue to slowly ease yourself down I start caressing your thighs.

You start to rock on top of me and place your hands on my chest for support. Once you find your rhythm I move my hands so that they are caressing your breasts and nipples as you move forward. Your eyes close as your pace quickens. I move my hands so that I can firmly grab your hips.

I push down on your hips and thrust upwards each time to add some extra sensation.

I can feel you starting to contract around me and your orgasm approaching. I'm trying to concentrate on matching your pace to ensure you reach yours soon.

Suddenly you start to dig your nails into my chest and I can feel your whole body start to tense. I pull you close as the waves of pleasure ripple through you.

Once you open your eyes I gently cup your face in my hands and kiss you, slowly, delicately. Holding you close, I start moving myself out of you, relishing the ripples I can feel as your muscles move around me... I roll you onto your back as our lips meet once again. I break the kiss and move away, standing up next to the bed. You sit up and move towards me. I continue to back away slowly, wordlessly urging you to stand and follow. I keep backing up until I am standing near the wall and you are walking towards me. When you reach me, I embrace you and quickly turn you around so that your back is against the wall. With my upper body holding you there, my rigid length presses against your lips once again and I step closer pushing my way inside. You wrap your arms around my neck and I reach down underneath your soft place. As I lift you up you wrap your legs around me.

Holding you against the wall I continue to thrust repeatedly into you.

After a few minutes you let your legs down and I ease out of you. Grabbing my length, you lead me back towards the bed.

You bend over the edge of the bed and continue to pull me towards you. You guide me to your waiting lips and I slide right back inside. Grabbing your hips I slide fully inside.

As I increase the pace you push back against me, eager to take every inch I have. As I continue relentlessly, I ease a pinky towards your cute puckered soft place. I gently work the finger around, teasing ever so slightly. As I feel both of us quickly approaching orgasm, I work my pinky into your soft place. I can feel you immediately tighten and neither of us can withstand our orgasms. We collapse together onto the bed, exhausted.